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Re: [Tads3] Listing Contents of Surfaces



Eric suggested this correction:

You see a small table (on which is a banana) here.
While that's certainly better than the original (i.e., treating surface like a normal container), it still doesn't sound very good. I prefer the simple:

You see a small table. On the table is a banana, an orange, and a penguin.

Or if you want something less choppy:

You see a small table on which rests a banana, an orange, and a penguin.

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